tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post4035978143832030959..comments2023-06-10T22:05:08.946+10:00Comments on <center>I Can't Believe It's Not Better!</center>: Shock Therapy - 3WW PostCrybbe666http://www.blogger.com/profile/14752123812270914073noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-14706083433958587252010-02-06T12:00:16.514+11:002010-02-06T12:00:16.514+11:00Creepy and calculating kid you conjured up there P...Creepy and calculating kid you conjured up there Paul. Nice work!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-18104993228389138752010-02-06T04:10:43.579+11:002010-02-06T04:10:43.579+11:00Dead good!Dead good!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-10029261926680149122010-02-06T02:04:23.426+11:002010-02-06T02:04:23.426+11:00Just left a comment on you circle of friends post....Just left a comment on you circle of friends post. Just to say I like the new look mate. I've been toying with the same idea....but not too sure as yet. Great starter sentence as well for FFF.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-84684364397458707332010-02-05T23:01:06.298+11:002010-02-05T23:01:06.298+11:00excellent piece. very stylish and super descriptor...excellent piece. very stylish and super descriptors. well done mate.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-5526601090114152642010-02-05T07:08:57.488+11:002010-02-05T07:08:57.488+11:00Your story gripped me...I liked the snarky stepson...Your story gripped me...I liked the snarky stepson, and had a very clear picture of him from your words. Great read!Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-79375388070010032572010-02-05T06:42:23.925+11:002010-02-05T06:42:23.925+11:00Neat piece of flash! It moves and shows nicely!Neat piece of flash! It moves and shows nicely!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-44893449550721362322010-02-05T02:47:16.894+11:002010-02-05T02:47:16.894+11:00Almost missed this MM. Glad I caught it.Almost missed this MM. Glad I caught it.Danielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16480047895970191126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-86486605227997845262010-02-05T00:06:31.678+11:002010-02-05T00:06:31.678+11:00yes; that is an interesting piece! and agree with ...yes; that is an interesting piece! and agree with the others that you have captured the feelings well!Anya Padyamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-15403313988781696252010-02-04T15:01:34.655+11:002010-02-04T15:01:34.655+11:00Great voice to this piece.
One little criticism...Great voice to this piece. <br /><br />One little criticism: watch your tenses. Other than that, the story delivered.peggyhttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-19971896645444063012010-02-04T13:25:21.238+11:002010-02-04T13:25:21.238+11:00LMAO! that was great!LMAO! that was great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-21735536857113527142010-02-04T11:21:08.328+11:002010-02-04T11:21:08.328+11:00YOu do sinister very well. This was a great littl...YOu do sinister very well. This was a great little piece, and the title caps it off.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-49114800575934130292010-02-04T09:53:36.090+11:002010-02-04T09:53:36.090+11:00Really great post. Loved that you captured a teen ...Really great post. Loved that you captured a teen so well.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-82095873276906090702010-02-04T09:37:53.047+11:002010-02-04T09:37:53.047+11:00So that's what a Freudian Slip is... or was th...So that's what a Freudian Slip is... or was that a Fred-ian slip...?Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-28205417648825981682010-02-04T09:15:52.718+11:002010-02-04T09:15:52.718+11:00I think everyone had this thought once or twice ab...I think everyone had this thought once or twice about a step-parent. good writing.Daily Panichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06179183072566661932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7332590926111810421.post-92020244879077192252010-02-04T08:38:58.848+11:002010-02-04T08:38:58.848+11:00I'm really loving your flash stuff Paul. Top ...I'm really loving your flash stuff Paul. Top work mate. (You should give FFF a go one week. There's a link to it on my blog.)<br /><br />Regards bud, David.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.com